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Big picture issues 101: The dreaded plot hole

Plot holes can be frustrating for readers and can take them out of the story. They can also undermine the credibility of the story and make it difficult for readers to suspend their disbelief. That's why it's important for writers to carefully review their work and ensure that the plot is consistent and follows its own internal logic.

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Book Review: The Haunting of Alejandra by V. Castro

The Haunting of Alejandra is a powerful and disturbing novel that explores the dark side of motherhood. It is a story about the ways in which trauma can be passed down from generation to generation. The novel is also a meditation on the power of female rage and the importance of self-preservation.

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The revise & refine stage of the novel writing process

The key differences between revising, editing, and proofreading lie in the level of detail and scope of changes involved in each level of revising and refining. Thus, the revise and refine step of the writing process begins by first looking at the manuscript as a whole before narrowing the focus to individual chapters, paragraphs, and sentences.

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Using The M.I.C.E. Quotient to evaluate your novel draft

The M.I.C.E. Quotient is a method of categorizing stories based on the four core narrative elements of Milieu, Idea, Character, and Event. It is an excellent starting point for evaluating the focal point of a novel manuscript to determine whether the first draft concentrates on the appropriate element or elements that will most effectively achieve the writer’s creative vision.

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Even fiction writers have to research their subject matter

Once you have written the first draft of your novel manuscript, you may find during the evaluation stage of the writing process that there are elements of your story that could use some fact-checking. Research is an important part of writing a novel, as it can provide the necessary information and inspiration to create a rich and believable world for your story.

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Believability in fiction: Another factor to consider when evaluating your novel draft

While fiction doesn't always need to be strictly realistic, these elements of believability help draw in the audience and allow them to engage with the story on an emotional and intellectual level. Believability should always be considered when evaluating your own writing to ensure that you meet the needs of your intended audience.

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Can you DIY your Developmental Edit?

Hiring an editor to complete a developmental edit of your novel can be expensive. If you can afford it, an effective editor will give you the outside prospective you need to take your manuscript to the next level. However, many emerging writers simply cannot afford the expense and do not have an established writing community to lean on. They may wonder if they can do a developmental edit of their own work.

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What is a developmental edit, anyway?

A developmental edit is a type of editing that focuses on the big-picture elements of a novel manuscript such as its structure, plot, character development, and theme. Developmental editors help authors to identify and fix problems with manuscripts such as weak plot points, underdeveloped characters, or an unclear story arc. They may also offer suggestions for improving the manuscript's overall readability and impact.

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Seeking targeted feedback on the first draft of your novel

Obtaining feedback on your manuscript during the evaluation stage of the writing process shouldn’t be the same experience as getting your mom’s proud stamp of approval on your published novel. The last thing any writer needs or wants at this stage of the writing process is for anyone to stroke your ego and tell you how awesome you are. During the evaluation stage, it’s important to seek out targeted feedback that will help you improve your writing.

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Letting it simmer: The importance of setting your rough draft on a back burner before you revise it

Once you’ve completed an initial evaluation of your manuscript, it’s time to set it on a back burner for a while and let is simmer. When you’ve been working on a manuscript for a long time, it can be challenging to see it objectively. Taking a break allows you to come back to the manuscript with fresh eyes, making it easier to spot areas that need improvement.

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Writing Assignment #7: Celebrate!

You’ve reached the end of your draft. Your novel is written. It’s time to celebrate! This is a HUGE accomplishment, one that takes some writers decades to reach. You should celebrate! For today, you should ignore how many pages are left in this book and take a break. The writing is done, and your brain needs some rest before making the shift into edit mode.

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When No One Is Watching by Alyssa Cole - A Riveting Blend of Thrills and Social Commentary

When No One Is Watching is set in a rapidly gentrifying Brooklyn neighborhood, where Sydney Green, a resilient young woman, finds herself grappling with the haunting realities of her community's transformation. As the familiar faces and landmarks vanish before her eyes, Sydney becomes suspicious of the drastic changes. The story takes an unexpected turn when she teams up with her new neighbor, Theo, a handsome and enigmatic figure, to investigate the eerie occurrences that plague their once-cherished streets.

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